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Breeze

From the west comes a gentle breeze Dancing the leaves in the stately trees The scent of pine comes in its wake Lovely perfume only nature makes Blowing now on the meadow lake Ruffling feathers on the resting drake Flowing hair sweeps across the face Moving the grass with a dancer's grace Invisible sprite, but its path we see A bit of magic this surely must be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/16/2014 6:29:00 PM
Very beautiful.
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Alexis Bennett
Date: 1/16/2014 6:33:00 PM
Sure thing. I think I actually enjoy reading poems as much as I do writing them. :-)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/16/2014 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Alexis...sorry about the mistake..appreciate your reading my poem.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/16/2014 6:29:00 PM
thanks, and thank you for all the info you post. I don't blog, but am a faithful reader...always looking for tips.

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