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Breathtaking, because

. . . The sunset, in its sweet surrender,

with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender

Beauty is definitely defined,

through majestic moments entwined

yet, without you

here with me

To embrace time and space,

my world does not feel . . . Breathtaking, because

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~ Lingering thoughts from the heart ~

Because you are a part of me

Just a little scribble ' (PoetrySoup Format) __________________ Breathtaking, because . . . The sunset, in its sweet surrender, with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender Beauty is definitely defined, through majestic moments entwined yet, without you here with me To embrace time and space, my world does not feel . . . Breathtaking, because -------------------------------------- ~ Lingering thoughts from the heart ~ Because you are a part of me

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Paige Hind

Date: 6/14/2023 3:07:00 PM

Amazing! I love to read your work!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/14/2023 7:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Fin Chuuk

Date: 1/31/2023 1:08:00 PM

This is breathtaking in itself… I think your poems should be in Hallmark greeting cards. That’s if you don’t have them out there already beside Soup. STUNNING!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/31/2023 7:05:00 PM

Oh, my ! Such a wonderful thing to say, Fin. I appreciate your lovely comment and the beautiful compliment. That would be nice, having my poems on a Hallmark greeting card. (Anything is possible). Thank you for your kind words. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/21/2023 12:58:00 AM

I like how you transitioned from the beauty, tranquility of sunset to how its beauty is lost because your not with your person. That's at least what I'm reading..:-) Much love Asavvy1

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/21/2023 2:37:00 PM

You're absolutely correct. That's the exact emotion that tangles within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you, Jared. My best to you. :) Brandy

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2022 5:40:00 PM

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Could I show you mountians you've never seen. Or share a sunset an evening scene. standing still the moment in time, something we shared with our eyes.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/29/2022 11:20:00 AM

Yes, I completely agree. "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." Your comment is so loving and tender, soft and romantic. Such a wonderful thing to say. My heart is smiling. Thank you, John. My best to you. :) Brandy

Bill Baker

Date: 3/6/2022 8:00:00 AM

Breathtaking poem, Bandy. Experiencing the oneness of ourselves and nature is exhilarating. Loved your poem. I've read this before, but didn't see a comment from me? Well, there's one now; with a big ol' Texas bear hug to boot, Bill

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/7/2022 7:10:00 PM

Being one with nature is a wonderful feeling indeed. Sharing such a moment with someone special, well, that is "breathtaking." Thank you Bill, for the lovely comment and for the bear hug. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/20/2022 2:09:00 PM

Beautifully penned Brandy..Blessing ~ Debra

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/20/2022 6:46:00 PM

Thank you, Debra. Your kind words bring a smile to my heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/22/2021 2:45:00 PM

This is mood shifting poetry Brandy. It is beautiful and romantic. Blessings xxoo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/22/2021 8:23:00 PM

Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you, Connie. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/11/2021 6:09:00 AM

This is just stunning Brandy!!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/11/2021 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. And the longing within continues to linger. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/29/2021 3:42:00 AM

Your romantic scribblers and photo touch my heart. Hugs.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/29/2021 10:05:00 AM

Romance should always touch the heart. Thank you, Victor. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I think the photo IS breathtaking. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/29/2021 2:03:00 AM

Breathtaking writing with deep meaning found in between the lines, Brandy:)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/29/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. Within these lines there is a deep meaning with a beautiful longing. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/27/2021 8:09:00 AM

Dear Brandy, such a lovely piece! Your poem is as breathtaking as your surrounding..but nothing feels right without someone in your heart. Love and hugs ~ Mala

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/27/2021 8:10:00 PM

Everything makes sense, when love embraces the heart. In such a wonderful way. So beautiful and poetic. Thank you, Malabika. Your thoughts are so tender. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George

Date: 11/25/2021 10:36:00 PM

A magnificent day with all beauty around, still something is missing and through your lovely lines, you make us feel the vacuum! Beautiful, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/26/2021 8:30:00 PM

I have never thought about my poetry in this way, Valsa. "Like a Vacuum" It makes sense. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/25/2021 12:26:00 AM

Dear Brandy, just came here to see if you had written any new beautiful poem... Hope you are fine my friend... Wishing you and yours a very happy Thanksgiving... Hugs... ~ Ani

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/25/2021 5:44:00 PM

Dear Anitha, it has been a while since I have posted a new poem. I am doing well. There is a balance between life and recreation. Thank you for being so kind and caring. Happy Thanksgiving to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/10/2021 5:17:00 AM

Beautiful Brandy. You write very nice poems :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/10/2021 5:09:00 PM

You are so kind. Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2021 10:32:00 AM

Brandy, your scribbles I just love, you engage your reader with your enormous capacity to love and be loved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/9/2021 7:54:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. Love is a beautiful emotion, one that leaves you floating beyond the clouds. Many wonderful blessings to you. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/8/2021 9:02:00 AM

Your "little scribble" is a really lovely poem--great use of personification, Brandy Nicole! Janice

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/8/2021 9:13:00 PM

So sweet of you to say. Thank you, Janice. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/2/2021 2:18:00 PM

Brill phrasing and superb imagery Brandy, this shows you at the moment so tender and looking with real hope. Blessings, Gordon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/2/2021 8:22:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. There is always hope. Thank you, Gordon. My best to you. :) Brandy

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/1/2021 10:59:00 PM

Lovely write. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/2/2021 7:32:00 PM

You and your kind words are appreciated, Regina. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2021 12:13:00 PM

just a little "amazing" scribble!!! Love this, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/1/2021 5:11:00 PM

Awe, you are so sweet. :) Hugs to you, Andrea. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2021 6:31:00 PM

A sensitive, sensuous tribute to shared experience, Brandy. Without it, even a magnificent sunset 'goes to waste.' Kudos, Gershon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/31/2021 1:10:00 PM

Yes, this is filled with so many emotions. A sweet ache and a tender longing. Even a touch of sensuality. You are exactly right, Gershon. Without that special, watching a sunset can leave a heart feeling lost. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 10/26/2021 2:43:00 PM

Brandy, wow, I really like your poem and your presentation is amazing, excellent ~ love and serenity _Constance

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/27/2021 4:46:00 PM

Awe, thank you Constance. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your lovely comment is appreciated. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/21/2021 7:24:00 PM

Dearest Brandy, it's been a while since I've lost myself in the breathtaking beauty of your poetry. This piece is sumptuous. Such tender romantic yearning stirs my heart's imagination in the most dreamy and wistful way. The blend of emotions is exquisite and your luscious pen is ever so alluring. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/22/2021 8:40:00 PM

Dearest Susan, my heart smiles whenever I receive a comment from you. Your thoughts are always so beautiful and poetic. (You are an amazing woman and poetess). I am in complete awe with your praise. *Softly blushing* You truly humble me with all your kind words and compliments about my poetry. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. I appreciate you and your friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 10/21/2021 4:12:00 PM

Brandy, what an image... the sunset with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender. Romantic but bittersweet because you cannot share the moment with the one you love. I like the effect of placing "Breathtaking, because" as bookends at beginning and end. Another masterful poetic gem from your pen that pleases the eye and touches the soul... going in my faves. Blessings, dear friend

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/22/2021 7:08:00 PM

John, there is something magical, yet breathtaking about the sun slowly kissing the sky. Sharing such a moment with the one you love, makes it even more enchanting- beautiful and exciting. A sweet ache lingers within, a tender longing. "Breathtaking, because.. " belongs at the beginning and at the end, to tie all the emotions together. Thank you for noticing and for the lovely comment. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/20/2021 6:28:00 AM

LOve your little scribble Brandy, and the depth of lost and love, and the amazing scene you share with the reader.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/20/2021 6:50:00 PM

This scribble is about feeling complete, yet lost all at the same time. Harry, you and your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 10/18/2021 3:55:00 PM

Oh my such a sad longing can be felt in this lovely poem

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/18/2021 5:30:00 PM

Hi Robert, there is a tender longing within. A sweet ache that curls softly around the heart. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy