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Breathtaking Beauty

Beauty in her, binds me whole- retained and caged she fills my soul, enchanted by her beauteous grace absorbed in her thoughts I yearn an embrace, the charm she exudes is ravishing her hypnotic hold on me is mesmerizing , transfixed I am lost to the radiance in her astonished under her spell I do not stir, kindling my sprits she leaves me spellbound intoxicated by her presence I am astound, natural bewitching beauty’s rapture I immerse God Thank You, for stunning us with a star studded universe. 11-Mar-2016 Contest: Breathtaking Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 6:00:00 PM

Sathya Babu, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/14/2016 12:56:00 AM

Congratulations Sathya: At first I thought you were describing a woman. Nice personification of the universe. Best, SuZ

Sathya Babu
Date: 3/14/2016 1:46:00 AM

Thanks Suz........Glad to know you liked this twist in personification....:-)

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/13/2016 4:17:00 PM

Nice reveal at the end, Sathya-- congrats on your placement with this work!

Sathya Babu
Date: 3/13/2016 8:11:00 PM

LOL..Thanks for your nice words............wanted to have some fun Sam. Thanks Again

John Hamilton

Date: 3/13/2016 2:03:00 PM

Great acrostic poem, Sathya, it was not a rhyming acrostic I was looking for this time but still was well done. Thanks for your entry!

Sathya Babu
Date: 3/13/2016 8:09:00 PM

Thanks for the placement....OK I missed somehow that this shd be non-rhyming poem.......It was a pleasure participating. Thanks You Again...:-)