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Breathtaking

Beauty, splendrously attractive, Ravishing and radiant, Engages all my senses As I open garden gate. Trees, vying for attention, Have resplendent, springtime wear That dispatches sweet perfumery, Attracting bees to everywhere. Knowing I must mind my manners, since I have entered Paradise, Noting all the fresh spring greenery Giving thanks for world so nice. Written: 3/10/16

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Date: 3/11/2016 10:30:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Joyce. All the best in the contest ... CayCay
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Date: 3/10/2016 5:31:00 PM
Joyce, you never fail me. Your poems are a breath of fresh air. Nothing says breathtaking like springtime. Peace to you young lady:)
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Date: 3/10/2016 4:51:00 PM
Joyce, this is a beautiful way to do the acrostic. I truly enjoyed the light and serene feel to this piece. :) Great write.
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