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Breathtaking

Bus stop was the place where the intrigued eyes met Romancing the atmosphere without uttering a single word Enacting a introduction to two lonely strangers that feels A calid embrace without touching any part of their skins Taking away the fears and disillusions from the far past Holding a desire that the magical moment lasts forever Telling to the mind if it is a sweet dream or an actuality Ablazing the emotions like a red lava volcano in eruption Knowing that a decision should be made in a quick second Inspiring the exchange of phone numbers to a future meeting Navigating in unknown waters waiting to be further explored Guaranteeing that the future holds a blissful union of two souls For Breathtaking Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton Fourth Place 3-10-2016

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Date: 3/15/2016 6:02:00 PM
Nayda, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/15/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 3/14/2016 9:48:00 AM
Congrats Nayda on your fine placement in my contest. Thanks for your entry! John
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/14/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thank you John. It was an excellent contest
Date: 3/13/2016 12:48:00 PM
Nayda, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/13/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/11/2016 10:33:00 AM
Herman's Hermits? Bus stop song? Do you remember / know that group / song? The first few lines took me there. I enjoyed reading your take on this Acrostic - original and attention holding, it should fare well. All the best ... CayCay
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/11/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you CayCay

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