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Breathtaking

Breathtaking B illions of years ago the universe was born R evealing a resplendent beauty that was and is E verything and more one could expect from A n amazing designer and architect and T imekeeper, beyond all human understanding H eavenly bodies and beings, celestial phenomenon T hat is incomprehensible in it´s complexity A nd simplicity in syncronicity with heavenly K indness and grace towards the human race I gniting within us a humility of heart and spirit N ever negating in our minds eye the unimaginable G lory that is to be revealed for our eternal blessing. John Derek Hamilton March 07,2016

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Date: 3/24/2016 8:17:00 AM
Truly a superb acrostic and one that has truth as its message. Closing verse is gold my friend. A7
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Date: 3/18/2016 11:29:00 AM
This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!
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Date: 3/11/2016 6:53:00 AM
Masterful write John .. A perfect 7 n a fav ..
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/16/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Upma
Date: 3/9/2016 3:35:00 PM
This is an outstanding example for your contest John. Your have expressed a visual work of art with your words. #7 I am faving this beauty my friend!
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/10/2016 4:13:00 PM
Wow Thanks Connie so much for your kind words and your fave.
Date: 3/7/2016 5:32:00 PM
Breathtaking is the word John - great acrostic:-) hugs jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/8/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan looking forward to your entry.

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