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Breaths For the Seasons

Autumn leaves encase A ground once caressed by heat Tread carefully here Beneath your feet animals Are hiding from winter’s breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/26/2008 11:43:00 AM
Very unique and lovely. The last two lines are very delicate. Good luck.:) Regards, Sara
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Date: 9/26/2008 11:41:00 AM
UMMMMM I love the tone and feeling of this Tanka so different Good luck in the contest! Laura :) "I love it! winters breath"
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