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Breaths and Fireglow

in silence, we connect through gazes knitted by starlit eyes ablaze like dusk's luster wafting by the sill ... and we need not ramble in paraphrases of night’s canticle, while folded hands caress the rhythm of twilight's melody. how deftly breaths and fireglow understand our same tunes, our same wafting waves, gentle as entwined roots jutting out from your palms, my bosom… together, we feel the stillness of love from the same face, and if our flesh doesn’t chafe in the peeling of autumn’s chill , it’s because… we have been soul mates before time was ever born. Your Best Poem EverContest Sponsor: John Hamilton Written 9/24/2014 Resubmitted 6/19/2020

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Date: 7/27/2015 9:45:00 AM
SUPER 7, on this great poem. Big congrats on your fine win my friend!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel nette!
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Date: 7/26/2015 8:35:00 PM
NETTE. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:39:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Nette, I love the last line especially. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:21:00 PM
No beating around the bush....just awesome!! Electrifying phrases that captivate strongly...yet gently at the same time. This is where love glows. Congrats on another podium win! // paul
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:56:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful Nette..:) congrats..:)! MABUHAY!
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:29:00 PM
Congrats Nette, beautifully woven write. The power of your pen - excites!
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:28:00 AM
Romantic and beautiful. Your images are intoxicating.
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Date: 9/26/2014 9:56:00 PM
Amazing write Nette ! Many congrats dear!
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Date: 9/26/2014 9:32:00 PM
Simply beautiful. I love it and you. Much love and many prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/26/2014 9:14:00 PM
Great one nette soul mates [soul groupings] Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:01:00 PM
Yep...I KNEW it. Saying 'congrats' is SO overused and BOOOR-ING! So lets see here...Great write! Nice! LOVE it! No-no, that won't do at all! Never mind...
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Date: 9/26/2014 6:10:00 PM
absolutely superb Nette many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing poem Nette
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Date: 9/26/2014 3:37:00 PM
Splendid write..Good job,Nette...Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 9/25/2014 3:41:00 AM
'before time was ever born'...Yes indeed! Time was 'invented' by man but this poem is timeless...
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Date: 9/25/2014 3:36:00 AM
I'm jealous - Nonetheless, straight to my favs...
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:51:00 PM
A beautiful vision of love intense, explosive yet calm in its secure understanding of souls separate that together mesh. Your soul mate, wow how marvelous you describe this love. It seems the only thing that would surpass the love in this poem are the two lovers themselves. As always you release your God gifted voice with ease.
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Date: 9/24/2014 7:47:00 PM
Deeply romantic work here! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/24/2014 6:12:00 PM
Are you sure you're not related to Shakespeare ?
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Date: 9/24/2014 2:03:00 PM
I like the softness of this poem and how it depicts the meaning of silence between kindred spirits. Nette, this is so adorable!
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:38:00 AM
You have a charming way with metaphor and nuance. This reader has to work hard with understanding, but the effort is always rewarded. This is why, to my mind, you're one of the very best.Your sensitivity is wonderful. Love, daver
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:20:00 AM
Blown, blown away! I like the second stanza;and to write like this one has to be tuned to that twin-soul wavelength. Impeccable poem that needs to be read again.
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Date: 9/24/2014 7:57:00 AM
Lovely visuals backed by a tender flow of deep affection. It takes a lot of eloquence to write like this with a translucent effect. Seems you have a soul mate, Nette. I want!The scene is set well and deeper meanings emerge when one reads it all over again.
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