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Breathless drop

My eyes view the scene untold,

ears listen to a secret whisper,

growing louder,

sound of falling rain trickles the old oak,

flowing softly,

stroking shadows of dark brown past age,

descends slowly down solid wrinkly path.

Drops of water fall from lifeless leafs,

landing on mild floor,

like specks of beauty,

wetting all natures growth,

from creators greetings.

Clouds finishes delivering living thirst,

and disappears away for blue skies to greet,

silence enters the quiet earth,

just the view of deciduous leafs dancing with the evening wind,

autumns spell,

captures the colourful forest in my heart,

and shows me in it's hidden solitude,

that life and death,

are not far apart.


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  1. Date: 8/9/2011 8:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Ryan. The best to you in the contest. Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 6:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Ryan. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

    Jackson Avatar Ryan Jackson
    Date: 8/3/2011 5:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Carol, thank you for your kind words. Peace and love, Ryan.
  1. Date: 2/21/2011 1:39:00 PM
    A pleasant read. Your simple wording conveys a great deal of quality descriptiveness.

    Jackson Avatar Ryan Jackson
    Date: 8/20/2012 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert, this was actually my first poem I writ. Thank you for your kind words and your read :-)