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Breathless

I smell less when I drink your fragrance I could care less about what my friends thought when we hold hands. I touch your skin and all I feel makes me speechless I feel helpless when I grab your chick Yet I become lifeless when I kiss your lips. I could own a PHD but with me in your arm am totally brainless You’re hope when am hopeless You‘re home when am homeless You’re voice when am voiceless You’re life and without you am a good as lifeless I held your waist but still felt touch less I believed in a lot but outside you I trust less I say I was changeless until I met you When I leave your side I become heartless You are my wealth, my money, and my honey You are the belly carrying my baby You wouldn’t trustless if I trust You wouldn’t be heartless when am your heart You couldn’t change less when am permanent You wouldn’t be touch less if am there all the time You can never break because the ring on your finger is break less.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/17/2010 4:17:00 PM
yes ur verse was beautiful Deborah. creative and lovely keep the Good work going
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Date: 7/15/2010 5:56:00 PM
Thanks for reading my verse! Nice to be young and in love! Line 4 I think you want CHEEK? Light & Love
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:27:00 PM
thanks alot guys i really appreciate the fact that yaaa like this poem hope to comment on yours soon and send more aiight
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Date: 6/22/2010 5:30:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Keep up the good work.
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:33:00 AM
This is just excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. This gives me some ideas of things to say at the right time. I can see wonderful images. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:24:00 AM
What nice and humorous expresseds. I liked the sentence and the last
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:10:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Osazee. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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