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Breathing Tree

Too chiffon to talk real— I'm lying— cause it will stump When saws and hands tear through; I planted its green life in my heart. Sounds far reeling in my ears That a rattling forest construes as neither chopping— or even music. My tree is stalwart and virtuous— Soon a martyr for humanity. I breathed out its vital puffs— Breaking shadows for my angst. Like me, limbs stain and shiver— I lean in to shake where she's Fixing me with her oxygen mask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/12/2023 3:25:00 PM
Excellent poem that contains some very deep thoughts about the natural world. After penning a poem with a comparable title, "Earthliness," I was contacted by a recording studio that expressed interest in adapting it into a song; the song has since been completed, and it is truly remarkable.
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Date: 8/12/2023 2:05:00 PM
I loved: Too chiffon to talk real, My tree is stalwart and virtuous— Soon a martyr for humanity... I love my oxygenated trees! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 8/9/2023 8:05:00 PM
A tree gives us oxygen, but it becomes a victim to man's greed as we chop it down . Well composed dear Paige.
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