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Breathing Life

Breathing Life When all about you crumbles and life becomes a chore, when despair and desperation leave you empty to the core. When there is no point in living and you wish that you were dead there is no one that can wake you from depression’s hopeless bed. When every straw you grasp at seems to snap off in your hand and every step you’re taking meets with ever shifting sand. When you soul has sunk to levels where it’s lost the will feel it is hard to then distinguish what is false and what is real. To seek your resurrection from this darkness into light you must struggle for direction as you rise towards the light. At first it’s just a glimmer like the hopefulness of dawn, but as the sun gets brighter it will help to keep you warm. It’s a long and tedious journey and it never has an end, but becomes less of a burden as you stem the downward trend. Should sadness comes to haunt you let life wash its waves away immersing you with feelings of new hope in every day. When all about you crumbles and life becomes a chore, it takes courage, strength and effort to make life worth living for. But when risen from the ashes like the Phoenix from the Flame you can once again start breathing and enjoy your life again. Ivor G Davies

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Date: 5/28/2015 11:56:00 PM
What do I say? I think you have said it all. A very good poem!
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Date: 5/24/2015 11:49:00 PM
IVOR, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:21:00 AM
Ivor at this best doing kind of stuff I like to write as well. Life ain't all roses, sometimes it do suck, huh? Good writing here, and the only thing missing I can see is the reality that we have lost our ability to distinguish between good and bad, between wrong and right, today, THAT IS A FACT and it starts at the lowest social end all the way up and through every governmental agency and includes the Supreme Court.
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:20:00 AM
I enjoyed this write. Trying to get life on a positive track again can be like an uphill climb, but the effort does pay off, and you realise life is worth living and wanting to hold on too. Good use of expression. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:55:00 AM
How does that old song go, "Nobody does it better"....thank you
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Date: 4/18/2011 7:07:00 PM
Ivor enjoyed reading this very creative piece of refreshing poetry.
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:47:00 PM
A beautiful write, Ivor. A smooth and polished read. Thank you for sharing.
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