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Breathing In Shivers

Ive no need to laugh if your unseen and even to breathe would be obscene The smell of you taints my nights and touching skin my pure delight Exquisite this love shivers my ground nothing could ever resemble your sound Rumbling laughs vibrate to heart trembling moments I hoard for my part Even in anger a control is seen never could you be hurtful or mean Sharpened diamonds cut like glass soft as petals eyes drift past Crystal the memories you’ve gifted me freedom of life soul running free Conjuring hopes deliverer of dreams you are the man of fairytale realms A strength of titans defended the weak honoured by many your company they seek Admired in whispers shouted from love you are the man I always dreamed of

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2010 9:15:00 AM
Jayne, Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, is one of my favorite poems. I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading "Breathing in Shivers", again Thank you for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 8/8/2009 6:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem Jayne, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 8/8/2009 4:32:00 AM
Oh Jayne, This one is going to my favorites. You have been blessed. Some people jump to hastily into love and miss finding their true love. I am so glad that you have found yours. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/8/2009 3:18:00 AM
Beautifully written. Sara
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