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Breathing

He takes another labored, raspy breath; there’s spittle in the corner of his mouth. The veil between this life and certain death is stretched transparent like a piece of gauze. His semiconscious mind would seem adrift, inspects the gossamer for tiny flaws. The voices from behind him ring a bell, and yet he knows the path is up ahead. A break among the trees reveals a dell; he grins, leans in, and takes his final breath. ————— for the B Forms and Words Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet checked with HowManySyllables.com written on 03/04/23

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Date: 4/3/2023 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A sad yet wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 4/2/2023 11:14:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is poetically written with great rhythm.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/3/2023 7:57:00 PM
Thanks so much! And thanks for hosting the contest!

Book: Shattered Sighs