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Breath Taking Love

BREATH taking LOVE in the mist of a refreshing summer morning you take my night away, giving passion to exceed my day a Romance so secure, a kiss before you walk away Cherishing you with one thought through out the day I await for your return, with the sight, holding my breath two spells bestowed on me and you a song meant for two, dance under the twilight strike a match burn my fire, my one true desire beauty comes in divine lost in the art our bodies show an over heated lamp, no reason to dim the light Passion so deep, nothing else compares temptation devoting measures, intoxication full of exotic pleasures worshiping the ground, a walk so unique tongue twisted, a rich flavor of mine Lusting you beyond hot, like a sparkling gem, a bag of rubies is what you got Holding me mesmerize with your eye making my cold days warm with out a blanket the sun gets brighter, only you can fix my broken smile a steal with your appeal luxury worth more than gold arms so tender I welcome your hold contamination of the heart, a smell of flowers perfect under the moonlight timeless flipping the hourglass around Destine to be the one my journey takes my fate, your hands, my love, you make, our lives worth living for I look in to the sky As two eagles soar, symbolizing our love A love that is forever, immortal for eternity, a love so endlessly.. for: the Rambling Poet //// (contest) = BREATH TAKING LOVE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2015 12:32:00 PM
Linda, this is so beautifully penned. Truly enjoyed. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:57:00 PM
A passionate write here full of beauty and grace, young love it's a beautiful thing and has wonderment in it's expression great work my friend enjoy. cheri
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:12:00 PM
This is a passionate and endearing write. Full of love and emotion that pulls the reader in and takes them on a journey of romance and sentiment. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:04:00 PM
Good morning here/good night there my dearest sis! This is a super lovely, super sweet and super romantic poem of yours which I love so much and has enjoyed reading while taking my breakfast! I saw it's one of your winning masterpieces! Belated huge congratulations on your fantastic win on this gem my dearest sis! Thank you so much for sharing! Soupmail for you! I'll be coming back! love and biggest sweet hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/6/2012 12:39:00 PM
YOU WRITE WITH SUCH PASSION YOU HAVE A LOT OF LOVCE IN YOUR HEART HOPE I MEET SOMEONE LIKE YOU ONE DAY LOVE YOUR EXPRESSION XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 5/3/2012 10:02:00 PM
Congrats! PeDee breathtaking & beautiful' sandy
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Date: 5/3/2012 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-written Beautiful Love Poem. I enjoyed reading every verse in it, and it really did captivate me. Love it!! Good write You made the characters come alive, and it was mesmerizing.
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Date: 5/3/2012 9:20:00 AM
P.D. this had great word choice to catch the emotion and feeling of a "breath taking love". Congratulations on being featured!
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Date: 5/3/2012 5:33:00 AM
Really enjoyed this Linda :) congrats on it being featured!!
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:37:00 AM
Shazaaaaammmm! Passionate stuff, oh Destroyer. Enjoyed mucho and now must still the thump of my pacemaker. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:10:00 AM
lovely poem.. and congrats...patrick
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:43:00 AM
wow 2 years ago, still this poem is like a breath of fresh air to me. love this. harry
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Date: 9/14/2010 8:54:00 AM
a beautiful beast
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Date: 6/24/2010 8:04:00 AM
AMAZING!
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:55:00 AM
I love the passion, you have a great talent. I see that you won an award. I am not shocked at all! great job! ~The Lovely Nightmare
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Date: 6/8/2010 11:20:00 PM
Really nice enjoyed this very passionate ... sarah x
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Date: 6/1/2010 10:18:00 AM
After reading this I completely understand why you won the contest.. ~ WN
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Date: 5/27/2010 5:33:00 AM
i love this :)
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" PD. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 8:04:00 PM
Hey PD! So good to see you in the top! RAY
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:27:00 PM
SUPER SOUPER CONGRATS to P.D. my BBF for your winning poem in the B.L. contest.. with these lovely lines so very expressive .. another great win for u to enjoy ..your BBF "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:05:00 PM
great write, well said!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:32:00 PM
PD you are now officially on my favorite Poet list. Thank you so much for your always kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 11:09:00 PM
beautifully said:)
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Date: 4/29/2010 2:14:00 PM
can you send me a soup mail message please, i need to talk to you in private.
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