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Breath On Thy Breast

She's a mom from a poor family. Everyday striving in a sidewalks. No shelter,no roof to shed. Her life is devastated. No food ,she scavenges day by day. She got pregnant,a man didn't stay. Until one morning has came. She'd delivered her son in a banquette. She feeds baby on her breast, So poor, she can't afford an expensive milk. To feed a baby she all adore. She is frustrated to give him , A better life, the safest home. Until one coldest night. The wind blows so strong. Her baby suffered for an extreme cold. She was baffled and nowhere else to run. Taking her baby,found a tree to hide. And was amazed by what she found, the li'l life she fed on her breast, no longer breathed, a cold cadaver. The life she used to cradle, had left, and gone in the midst of the night. Tears fell down on her cheek, and she mourned for a baby , She had given love and breath. Based on the painting :"Mother and Child" from Stephanie Deshpande Contemporary Figurative Art for the Contemporary Free Rhyme Contest of Cyndi MacMillan

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Date: 4/28/2019 5:35:00 AM
really beautiful poem;
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Date: 2/7/2014 4:01:00 PM
Wow!!!, this really stirred me with emotions that normally are not present. I could just imagine the woman going through all she went through then having a child with no man to help in any way form or fashion. But to start feeding it breast milk for lake of money and then the cold winds of destiny taking the small child from her hungry loving hands. This woman would have given her life I am sure just so the baby lived, but alas, it didn't happen.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/11/2014 12:29:00 PM
thank you, Will for a great insight on my poem..i really appreciate your message....as a mom, i got fascinated with the theme of mother and child painting of Deshpande..it took my heart so much.. that it turned me out to create a piece like this....thanks again!!!
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Will Karry
Date: 2/7/2014 4:02:00 PM
lake should have been lack, my bad.
Date: 1/21/2014 12:20:00 PM
The hardest loss for a mother such a hit wrenching ride my friend. You are getting better everyday letting the emotion come through your poems. :-) your friend Michael
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Date: 1/21/2014 11:32:00 AM
Breathtaking! That pulls on my heart strings very hard. A wonderful, yet tragic write.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/21/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for a warm comment ,Trevor!!!! :)) i appreciate it so much ^__^
Date: 1/21/2014 11:23:00 AM
heartwrenching story so beautifully conveyed, aiyah.. huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/21/2014 11:30:00 AM
thank you for an overwhelming comment ,Nette.. ;)) huggs..^_^

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