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Breath of Moon

BREATH OF MOON '''..''..''.'..'''........'..' ~ chain-link breath of moon smearing gray winter-kissed chill ~~ a night owl tiptoes ~ ~ (c) all rights reserved ----------- for Constance's Haiku Me Some Nature, Please by nette onclaud 2 sept 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 8:40:00 AM

Stopping by your amazing poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine . Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/5/2011 1:52:00 PM

i tiptoed through the tulips in the San Jose airport once with something of a night-owl whose name was Tiny Tim.. was a high point! .. it's up ms. netteski.. soupy mail has details. namaste ~N

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:23:00 PM

a very unique one it is. Congrats, Nette.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:47:00 PM

Congrats, Nette! Kim

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/4/2011 2:26:00 PM

congratulations on your win! tiptoes - i like it!

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2011 10:28:00 AM

Oh how I would love to see an Owl tiptoe in the light of the moon. They are beautiful birds. Many congratulations Princess on your win. Have a lovely Sunday :) & hugs 4 u

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2011 9:12:00 AM

Many more congrats, Nette : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 8:00:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,nette

David Williams

Date: 9/4/2011 5:06:00 AM

hey Nette congrats on this very impressive piece, i would give anything to see an Owl tip-toe, ha ha ..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:25:00 PM

Congrats Nette luv on 7th place win with this stunning poetry entry ..superbly penned luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/3/2011 11:14:00 PM

Nette, You were writing of an owl you saw near your home in this piece? If so, u made the ordinary, extraordinary! Awesome! Gwendolen

Johnny Sumler

Date: 9/3/2011 7:26:00 PM

Another beauty from your bulb of thoughts Nette! You've fashioned well the imagery and nature in this gifted haiku!

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/3/2011 12:46:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Sooo Much More Unto This Intriguings Verse Than Would Meet Ones Naked Eye My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Nette! *^_^* I Read Its Profound I Would Say, Thrice Times, & Could Read Its Splendours Fifty-five Times More *^_#* Yet Still, Only Your Gifted Beauty Would Truly Know All That Its Colours Speak & Speaking of Such, Twas Nice As Always to Hear From Your Lovely Hues, My Dear &, Sweeet Poe!” === My Love Unto Your Beauty, Ever & Ever & Evermore, Jasper *

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:51:00 AM

love the visuals this one conjures up, Nette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 9:57:00 AM

Good luck in Constance's contest with this wonderful work..Reads like a winner to me..Your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/2/2011 10:43:00 PM

good luck in the contest. john

Kash Poet

Date: 9/2/2011 10:01:00 PM

Towards a frog...I think...haha...j/k.I sometimes wonder how you choose the wonderful words..When you say 'chain-link breath'perhaps you are first to use chain-link as an adjective to 'brea th'Another excellent write Nette,Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 9:56:00 PM

very beautiful one,Nette. I never thought of an owl tiptoeing!!

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/2/2011 8:45:00 PM

got latest? is all cheery and such... yo, mama

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/2/2011 8:37:00 PM

A great and incredible write! Love the descriptions...as usual, the best! Good luck in the contest...it will do well I know!!

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 9/2/2011 8:09:00 PM

wow~~~another fantastic write~~~hmmmmm...i can feel every line my friend~~~LOL~~~and two thumbs up about your comment in frank herrera's blog.....about the former president~~~hahahaha*-* jun-jun ~*~