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Breath of Love

Breath of love Craved for long to speak to you my heart, Nevertheless your eyes said so well thy part, Still an understanding that we had construed right, Only was needed for clarity of further sight, I waited on the road as you drove me far, Words were less, didn't know where to start, End of first meeting as if time had betrayed, But longing to see you again strongly stayed, Closer we came as days and months passed, Talks and talks, what beyond when asked ? Rhyming hearts and inhaling breath of love, Is it a soul to soul connection from up above ? Written Feb 8th, 2015 For contest "Breath of love" by Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 2/8/2015 8:19:00 PM
Very nice ...I dont believe in love at first sight. ( lust, yes)..but lots of conversation is the key I think. Enjoyed your poem. BG
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Date: 2/8/2015 2:14:00 PM
Talks and talks bring hearts close together, Dr Upma...Lovely story...Breath of Love will win in the end. Hugs
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Date: 2/8/2015 9:18:00 AM
Good luck with the contest
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Date: 2/8/2015 7:54:00 AM
Strong question indeed Upma.Loved your "Rhyming hearts". God bless.GL in the contest.Love>>>rajat
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