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Breath of Love

I wander in the nature’s green, trees in rows the birds preen Like a gem glimmers the morning dew, with a precious diamond’s hue And flowers bloom as I gaze anew, eggs hatch to welcome lives in queue I can smell the wondrous earth, the distant flow of water in mirth It’s a new dawn another day thereof, wherein I sense his breath of love. As I prod on the old man smiles, he delivers milk by cycling miles Passing the farmers sweet abode, the cry of new life reaches the road A child wails by the neighbour’s door, with a sweet candy her eyes adore Roaming the street is a hound grown, pups trailing behind unknown A jocund street undreamed of, wherein I sense his breath of love. My dearest rush out sighting me afar, without whom my life is a war The tiny tots in their cradles lie, as we sing a lullaby This is the world I am part of, wherein I sense his breath of love. © (4 Feb '15) * Honourable mention in the contest 'Enter a poem #1' by Poet Destroyer

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Date: 12/17/2015 8:48:00 PM
Poesy, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/17/2015 5:45:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to your words Nadiya congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2015 3:40:00 PM
POSEY, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:49:00 PM
POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 3/18/2015 5:02:00 AM
- Wooow, this is really beautiful, glad I found exactly this today !!! (7) - I wish you a beautiful day, Nadiya - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 10:22:00 AM
Wow. I couldn't resist rereading this piece--so inky! Love it
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Date: 2/17/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Sarpong for the visit and comment.. nad
Date: 2/8/2015 4:15:00 AM
a delightful piece nadyia when love and nature flow through the pen golden inked piece wishing you a blessed sunday
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Poesy Relish
Date: 2/8/2015 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Liam...your comments are always encouraging... have a great weekend... lov, nad!
Date: 2/5/2015 8:01:00 PM
I love this poem! It has a nice flow and beautiful imagery!
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:59:00 PM
Thank you for stoppkng by valerie... pleased that you like my pen
Date: 2/5/2015 8:20:00 AM
:) beautiful NAdiya.. :) Love it.. :)! sure GAil will love this.. :)thanks for visiting my poems.. :)
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Olive for your visit and lovely words... nad!
Date: 2/4/2015 11:29:00 AM
I agree with Jack. Nad has great talent. Her poetic career is very bright. Any reader of this poem "Breath of love" will say yes to my statement. It is undoubtedly a major poem. Work of a skilled artist. God bless this poet. Good luck Nad.
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Poesy Relish
Date: 2/4/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Rajat... not sure if i am worthy of your praise... i am really happy friend... be blessed... nad!
Date: 2/4/2015 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful my dear Nadiya! I have discovered a new talent... let's not loose track of each other! Love and huggs, Jack XOX
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Date: 2/4/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thank you jack... i am definitely going to read your poems... lov, nad!
Date: 2/4/2015 3:04:00 AM
A wonderful poem Nad. You are a gem my lovely friend.One of the best poems I have read so far. Must be the topper.My fav.God bless, Nad>rajat
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:06:00 AM
I am really pleased that you like it Rajat... be blessed... nads!

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