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Breath Gold

" BREATH GOLD " There were the crests , There were the troughs , With every breathe that grows . Your matter as attire , Concatenate the souls on fire . For now and forever . To just breath gold , And let hold .
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Date: 5/20/2016 6:33:00 AM
I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 6/2/2016 11:04:00 PM
OMG!! thanks it really means a lot. :)
Date: 5/13/2016 12:55:00 AM
a pleasing write... that oNEsHE........ LINDA
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Shruti Rawat
Date: 5/13/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thanks : )

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