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Breath Apon Memories

Your breath apon my memories Twirling apon loves weaponry Cycling between lying signs Out of this whirling I have climbed Your breath apon my memories Spinning apon loves treachery Blowing between hurtful rhymes Out of this tornado I have survived

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Mark Martin

Date: 1/5/2017 1:36:00 PM

Great imagery! Congrats on your win Holly! :-)

Holly Bohto
Date: 1/5/2017 8:04:00 PM

Stormy times. Hurtful rhymes. Artistic finds. Minding mine. Thank you Mark:)

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2016 7:19:00 AM

That next to last stanza did hurt, poetry used to cause pain is not poetry at all, in my opinion. But, the ending was perfect, you survived and are probably a much better person for it. Nicely done Holly