Breath

where life sets me free together we float in dreams my best friend and i © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/16/2022 1:57:00 PM

Your "Breath" is a wonderful write. Few words with much said. Today be blessed................

Bill Baker

Date: 7/26/2022 8:10:00 AM

I enjoy your Senryu, Harry. Traveling in dreams with friends, sounds blissful to me my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 10:17:00 AM

Ah, that's beautiful... It's pretty true that our days are careful because of our friends and because of our imaginations. Great senryu

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2022 4:49:00 AM

Our dreams can set us free be it daydreams or nightdreams. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Your visit to my page always encourages me. Sara

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/23/2022 8:34:00 PM

In our dreams, our rendezvous, we are young, He has shown us this. Something to look forward to Harry, God sent! Stay well ~Anaya

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/23/2022 8:02:00 PM

Keep breathing, my friend! Light and Luster, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2022 6:48:00 AM

Beautiful, ethereal, surely one that has passed away. Hugs, Harry ~ Kim

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/22/2022 8:57:00 AM

A breath of fresh air, when you float and life sets you free is your friend your dreams, is it God, or is it a secret....... Well Penned dear harry. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/20/2022 6:57:00 PM

The breath we take and need and he is our best friend for without him we perish. Insightful piece Harry. Witty as always. god bless you my friend...