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Breast Cancer Assault-Pinktober 2

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Still going after my 9th year of surviving...

Silently you crept onto my weakened chest; Grew huge until pain flooded my core, Then put inner will to an arduous test. You were found when I undressed; Gently rubbed where I was sore, Silently you crept onto my weakened chest. Slowly you took away all my zest, But I wanted to even the score; Then put inner will to an arduous test. I did what I thought to be the best; So I fought your callous bloody war, Silently you crept onto my weakened chest. Thought this must be my life’s quest; Thus I fought like I have never fought before, Then put inner will to an arduous test. I consider myself extremely blessed; Fighting like a lion’s fierce roar. Silently you crept onto my weakened chest; Then put inner will to an arduous test. Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey Eighth Place Winner ~ "PINKTOBER #2 (old/new poems)” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer’s Oct. 1, 2015

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Date: 10/24/2015 11:04:00 AM
A subject very close to my heart Caryl - my maternal grandmother died of breast cancer when my mum was 8 :-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Caryl!
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:00:00 PM
amazing... congrats
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Date: 10/11/2015 8:21:00 PM
I like that repeating line about putting the inner will to an arduous test. it hits home with reinforcing that idea. Congrats in this contest and good night. I am finally going off for the day!!
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Date: 10/8/2015 11:57:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest PINKTOBER blog titles "YOU SAY," if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:23:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poem.
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