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Breakup Days

clouds r geting angry n storming hard... leaves r getin dry n falling apart... winds r getin haunted n shoutin loud... reasons r out of my mind lyk im in shroud... im frightend wid d dark moonlight..lyk blaming me.. bt getin a hope frm light tower...4 continuing it... waves of sea r rising rising upwrds..lyk tellin me... reasons r in ur heart ..u just hv to admit it... my nervs r getin frozen...n makin me numb.. my head z wreckin upside down...lyk thrown n broken.. deep inside dere r wrds of urs blazin...n makin me crumb... servin u hs taken me into trashes...nw its forbidden.. nw im sailin in an ocean lyk a free soul wid passion.. liftin myslf up n touchin sky wid naked eyes... reasons r hard to find nw..pausin ds commotion.. till dn flyin free spirited n searchin 4 hidden bays... if u like ds poen or evn nt...just post ur cmnts...i wud realy love to observe dt...thnks for readin...

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Date: 11/20/2013 2:42:00 PM
You have your own style, I lenjoyed your poem. It has an exotic feel to it.
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 11/28/2013 2:50:00 PM
Thanku 4 such a good feedbck :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:44:00 PM
- A good poem, Parivartana. - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/18/2013 2:50:00 PM
thnx anne...gud to c u after long tym... :) :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:06:00 PM
Well penned....searchin 4 hidden bays...good line.LOved it
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/18/2013 2:37:00 PM
Thnks litan :) :)...hv a luk on odrs poem too..

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