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Breakup

BREAK-UP
So it’s over
I feel nothing
All along I thought it was,
Something special,
But nothing?
So what was I afraid of?
The dark has come and gone
And I wasn’t even tough,
 Just slept and woke up at noon
And you were gone!
I felt healthy, completely cured!
Of the malady, vagary, misery, vanity!
Yes, all gone!
Thank God!!

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Nice featured poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:38:00 PM
    The universal experience... Fine work. Jack

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:03:00 PM
    That's the way to do it! Yeah Girl!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Bright, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:29:00 AM
    Whoa! That sure sounds like a great feeling - it is fear and doubt that makes us hold on to some things but once that goes peace enters into our every being. Very well penned Githui!