Breakout

I have a yearning To break out of confinement The tortured inside The painful layers of fiery hate Breakout of prison, be freed Russell Sivey

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/8/2012 7:59:00 PM

I love the juice in each line. The grape of the wine. YOU have a strong message which evokes spirit from me. I am NOT a big reader of poetry, nor do I particularly like MOST poems. Truth lies behind what you cannot disguise if you tried Russ. Keep me READING...As I KNOW you will. HIGHEST REGARDS, JOEY, PS I often do live poetry events and at a recent reading I came up with a saying "We are PRISONERS inside the walls of our head....fortunately we also the WARDEN!"---YOU are FREE! 7up and Fave

Don Johnson

Date: 1/7/2012 11:57:00 PM

forgiveness ask, then move on, catch another lover, dwell on past kick it up the rissole, fast, new romance is upon ya..... thanks Russell....