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Breaking Up Early

Breaking Up Early (Argus) September 10, 2015 I chased you: Time was in my favor. Living in this sometime world, Words blowin' free, Falling out of my mouth. Reckless, I couldn't carry on nor care. The king will come, The one I'll give my heart to, A poetic leaf And a stream of tears Will be received Willingly. My heart Wants to collapse. This warrior Will throw down the sword. I can't keep up, I can't think straight Anymore.

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Date: 9/14/2015 3:11:00 PM
Kristi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/12/2015 1:37:00 PM
- Kristi Victoria, a sweet and lovely poem - I welcome you with your first poems here on P- Soup - Good luck ..... have fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2015 9:01:00 AM
Kristi, welcome to poetry soup... Love skat
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