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Breaking Point

It's the final ray of sunlight Shinning on my cheek To stand aginst darkness, Too frail, too weak The final ray of sun lights Dim and dying in vain It's passed time to fight back Let the darkness reign

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/22/2017 2:58:00 AM
A very good poem, it depicts your mood very well.
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:43:00 PM
Well expressed.. Interesting name..wxw
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Wingless Moth
Date: 11/8/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you!

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