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hand in hand the dreaded moment when your soul took flight chilling the silence abandoning me in forlorn despair adrift sullen in a dizzying state of utter devastation the gruesome knot of my world sadistically twisted Submitted on March 24, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 5, MARCH 2019 FOUR LINES POETRY sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 1ST

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/2/2019 8:06:00 PM

Line Congratlatins on a great poem. And sharing the background of this, too, Thanks, Line Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/2/2019 9:38:00 PM

Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2019 10:52:00 AM

Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sadly beautiful piece, hope it is just fiction ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2019 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, Constance. Inspired by my father's passing as he held my mother's hand.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/28/2019 4:18:00 PM

Great poem great win great poet!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy. I'm running out of $5 bills for your compliments.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/27/2019 4:43:00 PM

Hi Line Congrats on your 1st placing in this contest - truly a chilling poem - well done. Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 6:43:00 PM

Thank for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer.

Michael Craig

Date: 3/27/2019 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 6:43:00 PM

Thanks, Michael. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:23:00 PM

- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 3:00:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/26/2019 10:36:00 AM

It's such a hard thing to get past but, not impossible; we feel the loss. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/26/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.

Janis Thompson

Date: 3/25/2019 4:57:00 PM

I have felt this so so many times. It is the utter feeling of loss. You have expressed it so well. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2019 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and heartfelt comment, Janis.

Susan Jeavons

Date: 3/24/2019 12:34:00 PM

Oh how I felt your despair. It was familiar. Blessings Line. Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2019 3:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2019 10:24:00 AM

"dreaded moment in hand...." set this poem up as something profound, and of course it was. From the first words to the last, prophetically sound, profound, and amazing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2019 10:58:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Caren.