Get Your Premium Membership

Breaking Free....

You wanted me Came up and tried to drag me Down to your firey pits called hell Not wanting me to dwell on the good Trying to force to stay with the bad Stabbed me when I tried to get away the first time But... I kept going The second time you shot me down But... I keep going The third time You pulled me But... I keep going Just give up now Because I am going to Brake away....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/3/2009 10:28:00 PM
truly inspirational, another great one!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/1/2009 7:32:00 AM
This is a very powerful write. It Shows your growing strength and determination. Excellent write, Breana! Keep up the good work! Love, Robin
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things