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Breaking Down

This morning our computer died; Our car won’t start as well. The bathroom sink was clogged last month; Our hand-washed towels smell. The pipe beneath the kitchen sink Had water shooting out. A total breakdown seems to be What life is all about. The super fixed the pipe; tomorrow We’ll call Triple-A And hopefully a jump will make The battery obey. We ordered a computer. (Ours was really kind of old.) The bathroom drain’s all clear From something Amazon extolled. For one thing I am grateful - With our car and P.C. dead, I have to thank my lucky stars It isn’t us instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/25/2020 9:41:00 AM
It's the law of Entropy at work! I experienced it this week when my toilet refused to flush. Had to wait a few days for the maintenance man to show up. He didn't fix it properly. Came next day and got it right. What's next? Hope it's nothing like what you went through. / M
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Date: 6/24/2020 1:36:00 AM
Your poems always bring a smile, ilene! I am so thankful it's not you and hubby meeting the same fate as the car and PC!
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Date: 6/21/2020 4:50:00 PM
Oh, Ilene! You're right, but c'mon now! How many cars and computers have you and your husband outlasted over your lifetimes... I say you've got a few more to go! Fun write! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 6/20/2020 9:38:00 PM
How true that ending is!
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Date: 6/20/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you for my first laugh of the day! Lindsay will put a gold star on your forehead! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/20/2020 3:11:00 PM
your final stanza puts it all in perspective Ilene, hope you and hubby are ok and all the broken things get fixed or replaced:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:55:00 PM
Well said Ilene, those other things are easily fixed. Enjoy your weekend, and I hope nothing else packs up. Tom
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Date: 6/20/2020 1:54:00 PM
Oh...dear. YES! Thank God it isn't you instead. Honestly, your poem has given some much needed perspective. Thank you, dear.
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