Breaking

chest of loneliness panting against stained window nailed with broken leaves Creative Haiku 9.21.2014

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Faye Gibson

Date: 9/28/2014 8:43:00 PM

I am fascinated by this one. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Daniel.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:10:00 PM

this one makes me think of a bird pinned to the window or some other small creature? very inventive. Congrats on your win.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/27/2014 6:01:00 PM

this was a really deep, profound one, and I put at least three interpretations on it during the course of judging - they're probably all wrong! this one fascinated me, drew me back to it again and again - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/27/2014 5:48:00 PM

Congrats...:)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 5:17:00 PM

deep sad haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx