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Break Up

The door you closed behind, The love you left out blinded. It’s me, who’s crying out loud, It’s you who’s looking so proud! Such love I could not find…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2012 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Celine. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:33:00 PM
Celine~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:29:00 PM
Well penned Limerick with nice images, Celine
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:21:00 PM
This is okay and I like the flow of the words. The message is also right on point. Great job! Joseph
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