Break Up

Sorry I cant go it’s not that I don’t like you We are just different You like parties and I don't Yes, I understand goodby

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2018 7:08:00 PM

Personalities need to have common goals which is why many couples break up. Wish people could be this honest from the beginning instead of becoming involved when it is so much more difficult to say good-bye. A great message in your poem Carlos! : )

Lunita Blanca
Date: 3/17/2018 7:53:00 PM

Yes Connie, incomplete sincerity is a clay foundation for happiness that disintegrates with the first tear of distrust.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2018 6:06:00 AM

You captured two personalities in such few words..well written, carlos.

Lunita Blanca
Date: 3/14/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. Enjoyed your write of "narrow world"

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/13/2018 10:11:00 PM

For some reason the first time I read this I had the distinct impression goodbye meant goodbye always. When I re-read it, I wondered if goodbye is supposed to mean goodbye for now. It is thought-provoking in that, isn't it?

Lunita Blanca
Date: 3/13/2018 10:32:00 PM

Caren, it was meant to create some mystery as to what was meant by "goodbye". I left it to our readers to decide.