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Break the Mirror

a soft refrain silent reflections as time fades one life to another faces of love seen before truth is lovers and friends they were never gone blue luminescence in corridor dreams to embrace blue luminescence in corridor they were never gone lovers and friends truth is seen before faces of love one life to another as time fades silent reflections a soft refrain March 11, 2023 Breaking the Mirror Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2023 1:00:00 PM

Love how you did the theme. I am wondering if it placed but I don't see congrats. For me, a winner!

Valsa George

Date: 3/12/2023 11:09:00 PM

You have broken the myster through a 'mirror' poetic form. Ingeniously done. All the Best in the contest, dear Mike.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2023 6:09:00 AM

Creative contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2023 6:41:00 PM

The very middle of this poem works for me, Mike, with the repetition of 'blue luminescence.' Kudos, Gershon