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Break My Dinghy

I walk a fine line with this limerick thingy So easy to fall off and break my dinghy Intentions are good I'd be good if I could Gonna try real hard if another chance you gimmie

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Date: 5/5/2016 8:56:00 PM
Jack, hope you have some freeboard on your dinghy. Your limerick is a fun read. ~ Sonia
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/6/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you dear friend, Sonia! Come by again! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 5/5/2016 11:34:00 AM
Awesome. I am assured of a smile when I read your work.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/6/2016 7:40:00 AM
Mission accomplished then!!! YEEHAW! Huggsies, Jack xxx

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