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Bread Lines

There is nothing now that could be worse, Than taking money out of the old folks' purse. So our elected officials need to remember, It will soon come November, And to the bread lines...they may be FIRST!

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Date: 6/13/2010 10:20:00 PM
hi daniel, been away for the weekend, what a winner! brilliant, harry
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:05:00 AM
YEAH! Tell 'em like it is! congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:20:00 AM
very nice one congrats on your win faleshia
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:30:00 AM
Many congratulations with this gem Daniel >> James
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations, Daniel on your worthy first place poem in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:14:00 PM
Hilarious, Daniel!! Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this! Totally enjoyed! We're in on long lasting mess...not even trying to guess when it'll end! Thanks for reading and leaving comments on mine..Pls read my first Blog when you have some time...Thanks! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:16:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your big number one win in the Limerick contest... very nice write and u enjoy your big win today ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:07:00 AM
Dear Dan, our Government is for nothing good!!! The EURO is instable and everything is getting more expensive. Politicians here won't have to pay taxes and no social security and they will receive a pension after only three years in parliament when a worker would have to work 500 years to receive the same amount and medi´cal care is also free for them!!! It is simply a shame. Danke für Dein Kommentar! Schlimm ist, dass man daran nichts ändern kann!!! Ein schönes Wochenende...Gert
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on taking first place with this outrageously funny limerick, Daniel. I believe a lot of incumbents will be voted out of office in November! Awesome write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2010 7:32:00 AM
Wonderful poem, but you will never see the elected officials helping anyone in the bread line, they are too busy "lining" their pockets.. love constance
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Date: 6/11/2010 6:33:00 PM
A wonderful entry for economic woes. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:31:00 PM
Great reminder that we get a chance to vote and state how we feel about the decisions that they make up there in the capitol..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:49:00 PM
great message, well written. thanks, chuck
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:29:00 PM
Good call , Daniel and best of luck in the contest . Sometimes , it helps to laugh at our problems and woes . I know of a guy who was asked at a quizz ; " what is the opposite to woe ?? . He replied : " giddy-up " !!! ...
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:58:00 AM
Nice one, enjoyed this limerick... smiles:)
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:41:00 AM
Great limerick,great work!Celene !
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