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BRAVER DAYS

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BRAVER DAYS



I see myself as a warrior reborn Bolder than starlight gleaming overhead An enlightened grail that betrayal’s sped The awakening of power once lost Like a birthing of inner courage shown; As shadows of fear turn to grit, atoned Before dusks’ painful wounds are spread. Where belief and esteem together ring Alive with my need for justice, restored To right honor wronged, as friend's lies sting And be engulfed by deceit, never again! Rebuilding trust by self-care well explored As lessons conquered braver days, I soared Into a wholeness this spirit finds glowing. Vicky Tsiluma's I'll Be Back Contest New poem by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/15/2014 10:14:00 AM
    I can see that as well, congratulations sweet warrior.

  1. Date: 8/14/2014 7:32:00 PM
    Well done! Many grats on your win ;)

  1. Date: 8/14/2014 5:35:00 AM
    Quite a brilliant take nette! big congrats on win!

  1. Date: 8/13/2014 10:00:00 AM
    Nice spirit displayed in this write. nette, congrats

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 3:05:00 PM
    Elegantly said my friend....very inspiring....

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 1:10:00 AM
    What a wisdom packed write, Nettie! 'where belief and esteem together ring', that's one for the warrior sutra, isn't it?? Marvelous work! hugs.

  1. Date: 8/6/2014 3:52:00 PM
    Oh, yes Nette I see you as a warrior of the spirit. This is a beautiful write, my friend...peter

  1. Date: 8/6/2014 12:58:00 AM
    It's all internal and I definitely see you as a warrior princess!

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 2:22:00 PM
    Nette, you are definitely a warrior love. This poem paints a perfect picture of your strength within. Hugs and love Gail

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 1:13:00 PM
    I feel the warrior spirit in you, Nette. Good luck in the contest with this write of rebirth...

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 1:10:00 PM
    - Nette, a wise and very well written poem - Good luck in contest dear friend! - To be patient, tactful, modest, respectful, brave, is not to be masculine or feminine, it is to be human. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 12:59:00 PM
    I like the idea portrayed here that getting one's power back holds the key to an enlightened life. Your poetry is liberating! Thanks for catching my work, Nette

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 12:07:00 PM
    I believe you are a warrior of old witnessing to those of us who are still babies, you poem is full of wisdom and bright hopes, as it should be my friend, have a great day luv xxx

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 12:00:00 PM
    At the end of the day courage is being able to look in a mirror and like what you see. Beautiful, empowering poem. Also, am honored to be on your winners' sheet; thank you

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 11:53:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me..Way to go with this one..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..If only,"as friend's lies stings" this did not happen but it does...Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Don't we all need a little good news everyday...Sara