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If I was ever brave enough Pondering my feelings What would I express to you Could I let it all out The depth and effect you have on me Could I unravel it all Make any sense of how I feel Organise my thoughts Engage your attention in me Just so you get my groove Its love I fear So when you are near I melt with the attraction Emotion overwhelms I only know how to run Impressions from my past Come forth to stamp a mark That cautions me to stop Not give in to my heart Let you in or allow you to see Give me the strength Help me become brave Push forward through the pain That hinders me with restaint Like barbwired in a cage Nervous beats pounding Distance myself Layers of emotions Like the evolving sea I feel this within me On the smooth shiny sand You stand, guiding me in Gently groping fragile rope Pulling me toward the shore To free me from my lonely raft Finally a man who can help me see Bringing me into the light Shedding my old skin All that has been locked away Saturates me, I am finally free Intensity that gravitates Me to you, you to me I am yours, you are mine No longer do I run or hide On the tip of my tongue Embracing that I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/30/2012 6:34:00 PM
Just wanted to say hi and see how you are doing.
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:31:00 AM
Soup-Mail...Oh yea! And I love you too.. <3 (o: Ha ha..
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Date: 11/28/2012 12:07:00 PM
Shaz, you smoothy you, I just love this very romantic write..David
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Date: 11/24/2012 8:23:00 PM
great girl,love it Shaz
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:49:00 AM
Good morning Shaz, I hope you are having a great weekend.
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Date: 11/21/2012 2:21:00 AM
An awesome write here shaz love it, xoxoxo Carma
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Date: 11/17/2012 12:13:00 PM
Shaz, beautifullly stunning, and I certainly get your groove, love it...nice to be back and read your work again...David
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/17/2012 4:26:00 PM
thank you so much for reading my poems David. I feel special that you take the time to read them. Thank you - Shaz
Date: 11/14/2012 7:50:00 AM
You sure let it all hang out, my dear Shaz! Well written! Love and big hugs, Jack xxx
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/17/2012 4:25:00 PM
Hey Jack......aaaaaw thankyou - mwah
Date: 11/10/2012 9:01:00 AM
Good morning, soup mail.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/17/2012 4:24:00 PM
Always gr8 to get soup mail :)
Date: 11/7/2012 5:39:00 PM
Wow! You really put it out there! This is a very gripping poem.I love everything about it. Nice write here.. :o)
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/8/2012 12:59:00 AM
yeah kinda did put it all out there...lol. Sometimes its just good to do that for my soul - otherwise i would crumble.
Date: 11/4/2012 1:43:00 AM
of love n time, and love divine, a lady sweet n true....
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/8/2012 1:00:00 AM
hey thanks Don....sweet and true ......thats me :)
Date: 11/2/2012 3:18:00 AM
A moving but beautifully written poem Shaz. - A scar will always healing and there will your heart also. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/8/2012 1:01:00 AM
ThankU Anne-Lise very much - mwah

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