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Brat On Base

Beastly brat coddled Daughter like mother Father overcome

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 5:31:00 PM
This creates clear images in my mind. I have seen this situation and it is not pretty. Kids need lots of love but coddling is a whole nother ball game. Excellent Senryu my dear friend! Love Ya! Robin
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