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Brand New Sheets

Since am talking about sheets, i'll try not to talk about sex And even better, i'll try not to talk about Alex The dj that rocked my old sheets, every sec He was quite an exciting one with all kinds of sets He came dressed in a no sleep fashion, what an ex

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Date: 3/30/2015 12:50:00 AM
Powerful natural rhyme. You have yet untapped poetic potential. It is evident in your ambitious diction. I advise you hone it to a pencil-point by apprenticing yourself to the masters of the superior craft.
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Date: 4/8/2015 5:54:00 AM
And I'll heed your advice. Thank you Mumo
Date: 3/29/2015 9:13:00 PM
Playful yet precise Nice slice Some spice Thx for sharing, and for your comment on the old RNA Dance Gerald Oliver
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Date: 4/8/2015 5:52:00 AM
Thank you for the visit Gerald

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