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Branched Form

S urmount the branched form A rise glorified reborn V isage of man once torn I conoclast earth adorned O rdained light born R eign as His firstborn.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 5:00:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2011 7:58:00 PM

and also a monorhyme!! Too bad we cannot have two things named for "form" For example,sometimes I'll do a personification that is also sonnet, and I have to choose which of the two to state in the heading. Well, this was a great poem, Debs, Congrats on your win.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/8/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Deb. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 3:05:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on another amazing win in this contest .. wonderful words ..and message luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Debbie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/8/2011 2:01:00 PM

oh my, a real creative shift, debs... must have been placed higher for me...congrats with love! :) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 8:23:00 PM

Beautiful expressions, Deborah. Congrats for the win

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/17/2010 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. More power and success. Ernilando

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/17/2010 4:24:00 AM

congrats on the win!! well done! enjoyed reading.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/13/2010 2:40:00 AM

Congratulations Deborah, on your success in Brian’s An Easter Picture contest with this amazing poem. It's nice to see you winning here. It's wonderful, I must say! Your creativity shines. Love to you. Happily, Dane Ann

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/12/2010 10:55:00 PM

A very worthy poem on this worthwhile reminiscing of our Saviour's sacred life. Congratulations on winning this contest, Deborah. (^_^) Noel.

John Freeman

Date: 3/12/2010 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your #2 Deb. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Sara Lokken

Date: 3/12/2010 12:56:00 PM

Very lovely verses, with a beautiful rhyme... Love,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2010 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for Brian's An Easter Picture Contest Deb. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/11/2010 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations Deborah. lovely words....Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2010 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/11/2010 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Thank you for your comments. It was a challenging contest. We can all be proud. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/11/2010 11:13:00 AM

Another tribute to your talent..congrats on your win in the contest. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2010 7:41:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your winning poem and placement in Brian's contest.. a wonderful win and beautiful words of your write.. enjoy this special win..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Brian Strand

Date: 3/11/2010 7:38:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest IDYLL is now open.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/10/2010 6:47:00 AM

Beautiful words, Deborah. God is love and gives love...so do these words. Love, Dane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2010 4:50:00 PM

And brought us in as sisters and brothers the adopted children of God...Keep the creative pen flowing..This write should do well in the contest. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/8/2010 3:52:00 PM

great job, much success.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/8/2010 1:22:00 PM

FIRST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THIS WAS A NICE WRITE I ENJOYED IT SECOND I TRULY THANK YOU ON MY TONGUE TWISTER WIN TEARS OF JOY FLOODED MY FACE THANK YOU SO MUCH GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT THANK YOU

Mitch White

Date: 3/8/2010 6:19:00 AM

Clever read