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Brain Ageing Con Vowel

Who is that, aunt shouts out loud as she always hears a door opening.  She also never answers to anyone calling out. Selective audible hearing i believe is the answer.  She adores life and cant abide diversions in her all seeking all knowledge events. Her aged  brain already stuffed, overloaded, with useless content, is forced into remembering. A switch in the off position, I am sure is required. A definite absolute refusal is the answer to any requests  asked. Lady of mature age maybe I seem, in my own mind, am just a teenager is her answer Because of brain age deterioration is happening, all knowledge isn't retained and frustration  occurs. What is the answer, what indeed? The answer is not obtainable maybe in years ahead. Meanwhile aunt decided a halt is needed, actually she accepts limitations occasionally, but a book is required always. Proving age cant even be used as viable a reason ever.  Con/ vowel alternate

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Date: 2/6/2013 12:46:00 AM
Gosh, Seren, you took the challenge and look at you fly with it!! Great way to do a poem for David and you picked a topic after my own heart!! Enjoyed the read!
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Date: 2/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, they say forgetfulness comes with age , geez its with the young also....Seren
Date: 2/5/2013 11:17:00 AM
Age detaches from the earth.
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:17:00 PM
thanks for stopping by ...Seren
Date: 2/5/2013 5:54:00 AM
Hi there you do get better each day wow soup xx
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren
Date: 2/5/2013 5:20:00 AM
wow Seren, your poetry just gets better,, and if i said that last comment.. well your poem may have been written for me...oh by the way,, i think this could be a winner,, hope i'm not tempting fate...Soup Mail
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Harry .............Seren
Date: 2/5/2013 2:20:00 AM
Wow, this is an incredibly wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a masterful piece, such a creative poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Russell....Seren

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