Boy

I wish I knew I wish I knew it 100% Like you do, like you claim Coz then I'll just pack my belongings And move to the mountains with you I wish I was still that naive girl Who believed everything but then i got broken.. That anything to me nowadays is like going to war Or like Math and Chemistry - my hardest subjects Maybe add Anatomy there too - The literature kind Because i've become a pro of anatomy - the physical kind I wish I could just have a face to face Conversation with God coz I'd ask him if I should take the risk I'd ask Him if it's worth it I'd ask Him if it's worth wishing

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/6/2015 2:27:00 AM

The boy should read this to know your feelings for him. Grand composition. 7+++

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:01:00 AM

Yes, he needs to read this:-) thank you Mumo

Paul Callus

Date: 4/5/2015 2:00:00 PM

It does not have to be a case of 'once bitten twice shy', Njeri! Do not be afraid to touch water, just because you're afraid that it might scald. Do not rush into things, but do not run away from opportunities, either. Take care. Happy Easter. // paul

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 3:56:00 AM

I like how you say " Do not rush into things, but do not run away from opportunities, either." Thank you Paul for your awesome advice.