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Box Elder Play

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Box Elder Play

Pinwheels flying high.
Box Elders in Falls array.
Helicopter play!

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  1. Date: 10/10/2009 2:18:00 PM
    This an interesting Haiku. I can see this scene. Sara

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 6:33:00 PM
    Surprising third line! : ) Great haiku, Martin! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 9:17:00 PM
    This is masterful as well, you are mastering this form...Raul

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 8:41:00 PM
    Creative use of imagery in this poem. Nice use of personification. I see you recently joined our Soup Family. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Best wishes with your writing. Karen