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Box Built For My Friends

A BOX BUILT FOR MY EVERY FRIEND I've built you a box As tall as a tree Your personal disposal for Black memories A box that will hold every Lover-flung hurt A box that will hold Stinky socks or old shirts. I have blown a glass cup That will hold every tear You will dump every heart ache Every shivering fear-- Certain inclusion of Aspersions unfair-- Echoes that strangle The person you are.............. You’ll perk savory fresh coffee Breathe a world drama free-- Thump your butt on that box lid --- And sip your new dreams. With my apologies....Revised to be w/o sexual discrimination for my male friends June 17, 2013 (original from 15 May 2013) Victoria Anderson-Throop

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Date: 6/17/2013 5:00:00 PM
The third stanza just totally took me away.Excellent stuff from you Victoria.
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 6/18/2013 3:30:00 AM
glad that you enjoyed it...we have all experienced painful love affairs...and must rally each other through them.....V
Date: 6/17/2013 11:54:00 AM
Victoria....thanks for this lovely present!!!! I surely need one. I love the cup for our tears....Bless you. Thank you for your posts on my work. I responded about the choice of words...please feel free to comment at any time! :-)
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 6/18/2013 3:31:00 AM
thanks Eileen...you are free to ignore any comments I make...I was born bossy! V

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