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Bow Down

A sun flower hangs full of bees bumbling, and birds humming! Fluttering tweets of honey, seeded with summer’s burdens: joys and woes, bow down, to kiss ground; as all of life must, eventually, prostrate. Tall pride now bends over. Silence in acquiescence: hallow return to heart’s core Mother Earth gathers the spent. Her depths churning to burn renewal (Repost from Aug. 2018: '02 Maxum 2700 SCR; DMS:OOWS then Pittsburg Marina: IWS, Oct. 2020)

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Date: 11/3/2020 1:58:00 AM
I am sure it's meant to look like a flower, to me it looks like a lamp...
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 11/3/2020 6:02:00 AM
lol...yes, it is very hard to draw a dead sunflower with confining / confounding words! Now that you mention lamp...I am seeing an old lady slowly tottering down a hallway with the old fashioned oil brass lamps you carried along...the single remaining bract still flaming though quite distorted :)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/3/2020 1:59:00 AM
you had me at ....bees....

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