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Bow Before a Flower

Bow your head to a flower, take its permission to pluck for God is present in it, this much it deserves. © kashinath karmakar(23rd May,2011) =========================== Placement: 6th; (June 2011) Contest:Flowers,Trees,Grass or Bees Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Francine Robert's "Flowers,trees,grass or bees" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 10:45:00 AM

Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2011 4:00:00 AM

oh my, just brilliant kashi.... happy congrats! :) huggs

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/3/2011 8:56:00 PM

lovely poem Kash, congrats on your sixth place win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 8:51:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your super win with this creative entry for Francine.. well done my friend.. luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/28/2011 2:20:00 PM

The Creator of the universe is present at all times in His creation? Interesting thot. This reverence is fitting for my king too. Hope u are doing well. Hey, congrats on your HM in Apples-Oranges also, Kash. You are on a roll. Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 5/27/2011 2:37:00 PM

Lovely tender write, Kash : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/26/2011 2:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one very much..Great testimony of your faith..My poem about the field of grain was written in response to driving by several fields of grain..This is in an area where farming is one on a large scale..My husband said that the grain was either barley or rye not wheat but I used wheat in the poem...My poem was allegorical work about the scripture that says that the fields are white to harvest but the laborers are few..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/26/2011 4:57:00 AM

An awesome piece Kash, I love where you took this beauty :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2011 7:23:00 PM

PS. You HAVE to check out the movie Apocalypto. It's awesome!! (maybe about six years old)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2011 7:22:00 PM

Kash, in that one contest of Brian's, he says to use any 5-line form. the E word (I always forget it.but it just means to write about art and it does not mean any specific form!) So you could use dodoitsu, tanka or quintain and write about a movie, book, or some piece of art. EAsy peasy!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 7:45:00 PM

Hello, Kash, it's after 8 pm and I'm baaaaaaaaack.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 10:03:00 AM

anything new i could feast on, kashi?? :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2011 10:55:00 PM

wow, this is pretty deep for a flower poem, Kash. Excellent job!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 8:42:00 PM

precious poem Kash.. tenderly penned with the beauty of the flower unfolding in God .. awesome my friend ..luv..