Get Your Premium Membership

Boundaries

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eileen Manassian.


I have some boundaries in place that you're not free to cross so keep your distance where you are, or all will be at loss It's only when my trust you gain, that you can come inside Until that time, I must decline, and soul and feelings hide For I'll not take a stranger in, my treasures I must keep I've trusted many times before and for those times I weep So, please respect my privacy and do not venture in Perhaps in time, if all be well, my friendship you can win My friends all know the joy that comes when loyalty is won There are such pleasant happenings and fun under the sun So, till that time when all is fine and secrets we can share be sure to stick to boundaries, perhaps I'll meet you there. Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/5/2016 8:46:00 AM
I am glad to count you as a friend. Hugs Rick.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/14/2016 9:30:00 PM
The heart is a fickle thing ... whatever you allow in it can cause it to flourish or to close up. In this case, it's good to be cautious, and only let them in when they've earned the right to the key!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/14/2016 10:19:00 PM
I love this. A beauty and a keeper - I so relate! Fav and 7 ... CayCay
Login to Reply
Date: 1/6/2016 7:40:00 PM
Good for you, only let those who love and respect you to come close!
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2016 10:09:00 AM
Yes, Richard. I am trying to do that. I really am. :) I am protective of my loved ones and friends. You know your place in this circle. Blessings.
Date: 1/6/2016 5:22:00 AM
- Lovely written - we share much in our poems, but not.... Everything ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2016 10:10:00 AM
:) Yes, Sunshine! You are right in what you say. Love you! :)
Date: 1/5/2016 4:11:00 PM
wonderful! you've conveyed this message very clearly and poetically, eileen!
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2016 4:49:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. As you age, you realize there is a lot less you are able to put up with. It upsets me when people want to befriend me out of curiosity. If there is a genuine interest, I'm usually quick to discern that...Thanks for the read. Hugs
Date: 1/5/2016 3:49:00 PM
hmm, I hope time will wait till you come there, excellent write Eileen, excellent!
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thanks, WS. Also...thanks for pointing out that mistake in soupmail. I'm glad you noticed it, dear. Blessings.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things