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Bought My Thoughts

I am the best At being stressed But not depressed Powerful mind, no "S'' on my chest I'm mysterious so my personality take a good guess State your thesis I'm not alive yet, a fetus Hypothesize Strategize Form a conclusion To my embodiment illusion lol It's scary To meet a thug with a titanic vocabulary I'm on a mission in life Call me the missionary I give you sight with my poems Call me the visionary I'm not good I'm great with words Call me the dictionary I feel I don't belong here My face dry never shed a tear God is near God is also fear No not God the Grim Reaper His cost of death is cheaper But why are funerals expensive Life should be extensive People these days are apprehensive Materialistic They rap about chains... Lack of realistic They think I rap I refuse My poetry is too smart Built to confuse lol I'm so amused Letter to the Lord Certified classic Lyrical electricity Feel the static Machine gun wordplay Automatic Sewn from exclusive cloth An unknown fabric I love Egypt the land is prolific So I sign my name on paper in hieroglyphic I paid the price to get where I'm at My destination been sought My mind is expensive I bought my thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/24/2009 10:53:00 AM
Excellent play on words that I see here in this piece. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/22/2009 4:04:00 PM
Little brother you are talented! Did I say that before?? Anyway it is true and need repeating! You are good! Keep on keeping on, Jamal! Happy Thnxgiving to you and your family! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:46:00 PM
Another great poem! always entertaining! love Simone
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:47:00 AM
Original and interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it. Florentina
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Date: 11/17/2009 2:08:00 PM
i love your style==excellent--Charma:)
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Date: 11/17/2009 10:23:00 AM
Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Richard. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Thank you for sharing your poetry. And thank you for your kind words. Love, Carol
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